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civility at sea
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The right, the left;
the red, the blue;
the blind, the bereft;
all bludgeoning and blaming the other;
none bailing with buckets and bilging the decks free
of the blood that builds and threatens their brothers
and even themselves.
This ship is sinking.
Who will reach the epiphany that they, too, are sinking with it?
the red, the blue;
the blind, the bereft;
all bludgeoning and blaming the other;
none bailing with buckets and bilging the decks free
of the blood that builds and threatens their brothers
and even themselves.
This ship is sinking.
Who will reach the epiphany that they, too, are sinking with it?
commentary on ... well, you tell me. 
this was actually a challenge to do something that was:
- less than 100 words
- three or less sentences
- a metaphor
- a poem! (sort of)
this was actually a challenge to do something that was:
- less than 100 words
- three or less sentences
- a metaphor
- a poem! (sort of)
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This is wonderful. I think imagery is your strongest card.